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Cake day: July 5th, 2023

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  • You mentioned a lot of strategies we can use to fight for what we want, and then said that none of those will work.

    Then further down you suggested we should fight for what we want, but offer no concrete way to do that.

    Letting Democrats know that they can’t buy my vote with corporate campaign donations, is me fighting for what I want.

    If they want my vote, they need to earn it by offering real solutions for my worsening material conditions. Not expect it simply because they’re not Republicans.

    During the Great depression, when the ruling class did give many concessions to the working class, we had a strong left-wing party in politics and we had left-wing organizing in the streets.

    This tribalism you are demonstrating with the Democrats isn’t working for me. And it’s not working for the environment. As Biden just demonstrated.





  • Commodification of art is soul less. Doesn’t matter if a person makes the commodity or a machine. It’s meant to be aesthetically pleasing or elicit an emotion to sell something. It’s not really art anymore than what I’m writing here is art.

    Art is about playful self-expression and often sharing that expression with those who appreciate it.

    And AI creative writing is garbage too. I had Gemini write some poetry for me yesterday out of curiosity, and, as someone that writes poetry, I’ll just say it was formulaic and predictable. It has no understanding of the medium, it’s history, why things are done in certain ways, or ability to play with the many forms poetry may take. It’s a good enough replica for people who want to write a shitty rhyming poem. Like we all learned to do as children. And it has a huge vocabulary to make rhymes with. But it was still uninspired drivel.

    For creative writing, it’s a tool. Not a writer. And for technical writing, well, it’s often wrong about things so… still a tool.



  • The patterns in poetry date back to when writing was less common. They’re mnemonic devices.

    Today, they’re still valuable when performing poetry.

    I tend to not follow typical rhyme patterns, use off rhymes, non-ending lines, alliterations, etc. instead. I always found the typical rhyme schemes I was taught in school stifling, but as I’ve practiced my craft more, I have gotten more comfortable incorporating them into my toolbox.

    Anyway, so many non-poets commenting in this thread. People who are serious about poetry know that they’re unlikely to make a living off it. We write because we get joy out of making and sharing our art. A lot of poetry is still performed at open mics and poetry slams. And most of it is shared with people we know who appreciate it. In other words, most poetry isn’t written with the intention of ever publishing it.

    It’s something we enjoy playing with, in other words. And until a machine can experience joy and playfulness, they’re not doing art. Only copying it.