minus-squareSirence@feddit.orgtoBooks@lemmy.ml•Product placement seems to have found a way into books.linkfedilinkarrow-up1·3 hours agoAlso in three sentences they used “she had” 5 times. This sample reads as if it never even passed an editor. Edit: actually there is another “she had” in the first sentence. Crazy. linkfedilink
minus-squareSirence@feddit.orgtoBooks@lemmy.ml•Product placement seems to have found a way into books.linkfedilinkarrow-up4·8 hours ago“not full of confidence” Who writes like that? “Lacking” is a word that exists. linkfedilink
Also in three sentences they used “she had” 5 times. This sample reads as if it never even passed an editor.
Edit: actually there is another “she had” in the first sentence. Crazy.